NintendoKirby64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Maxine Vlog 01]

I’m sorry for asking this, but did people only front page this because of the tits?

While voice acting is good, there’s greater animations out there that people have spent more time putting effort in time into.

No, I’m not bashing this, it’s just that there could’ve really been more better details or really any shots, interesting things that could’ve happen.
The art style is very cute, along with the anatomy. Background gives off a homely aura that feel cosy, just comfortably.

But... honestly? I don’t think this really deserves front page. I believe it deserve attention to draw in incomers who could love the animation, but... after seeing that other animation where it’s literally 4 seconds of this lady jiggling her boobies? Thot begone.

There are multiple animations out there that could’ve been front page, such as some collabs (organizing one is not easy considering the deadlines and turning in an animation on time without any sort of delay), or at least an solo project.

Like I said, the art is superb. Love how the flesh feels real, you could see the mass resisting against your hand if you push back. But... please, do practice on animating. Make it fluid, you’re making movement, not frame by frame art.

Just a suggestion.

Also. Animation made for a friend? Why didn’t you add that in the description? Welcome to the website, we’ll give critics and “amazon” reviews to give feedback on what we think. Not to mention, if this was a gift for a friend, then it’s almost depressing for this to even be front page for a tiny video. Being made for fun or not, we would’ve never know without any full details in the description.

[CHASW.fla]

Great animation, only, you used Cethic's sprites without his consent. Also, work on the quality on the cracks, there should be more thin lines and more spread apart. Details would be appreciated in the animation. Work on the shading and lines for the rock island, it looks too bland. Remember to add some light and tones to add more depth into the figures.

[Paradigmadness 2]

I nut. Again, Jsoull. Well fucking done man. Whenever you get the chance, relax and enjoy what you made man. Congrats to everyone who made and anaimating this piece. And again, thank you spots for helping out Jsoull.

[Madness: Artifact]

HOLY SHIT JSOULL I JUST HAD AN ORGASM DUDE HOLY FUCK!!

Asides from the mindless fangirling, I knew you could pull through working on this. You did very well on putting such dynamic camera angels to give the viewer a sense of mystery, something that lurks in the dark we do not know of. And the foreshadowing! The connections also from Project Abaddon and the first Maxification 1! The clouds obscured the area the two engineers were at, which I must say, was probably a pain in the ass to animate but worth the effort considering how most of the foregrounds in madness consists of a gradient sky and nothing much.

The depth of trying to make the rocks (yes i remember you were screaming in pain about drawing them) twisted and coiled also gave the illusion of an ancient old area, closed off of a secret sleeping weapon.

Great job Sigs for making the intro (and getting my favorite potato sack unit up there) to help contribute to JSoull for his project that he's been working for. Especially the storm on what's going on and all. And props to you both! I'm impressed on how you guys made these animations and came so far.

Always looking up for more creations you'll be making, eye ball poppin fanatic. Please, don't forget to look back and think on what you make sometimes, take in what you made, your progress, and your story of how you came so far to make it. Remember to focus on your life as well man, as much as we love your animations, you need to make sure you keep in touch with yourself to proceed on doing what you love doing the most. Thank you Spots and everyone else for supporting and helping this sir for what he does, and to give him the time he needs to focus.

cryono, bless your music man. keep it up.

Again. Fantastic job as always man. Don't forget to open your mind and eyes to what you do and conjure.

Jsoull responds:

Thanks for the feeback, I've got plenty more in-store for Madness Day.